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Beta Reading: Overview
Beta readers are volunteers—avid readers who do this for the love of it and because they genuinely enjoy being part of the creative process.
As a beta reader, you get an exclusive first look at a manuscript before anyone else—and your feedback helps shape the story into its best version.
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You'll share your thoughts on characters, plot, world-building, and story development. What worked for you? What didn't? Why? Your honest reactions help me understand how readers experience the story and guide me in making it stronger.
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For many beta readers, this behind-the-scenes role in bringing a book to life is just as rewarding as the reading itself. If you love books and want to be part of the magic that happens before publication, beta reading might be perfect for you!
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New to Beta Reading?
Skip down to read the section on this
that explains more specifically what beta reading is (and what it's not)​
My Beta Reading Process
The process itself also varies from writer to writer. After much research, thought, and experimentation, here's what I've come up with for how I do it. I've set up a simple, straightforward process using StoryOrigin. Here's how it works:
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Getting Started
Click the link for the book you want to beta read and request to join. Once I approve your request, you're in! You'll start with Chapter 1, and each time you submit feedback, the next chapter unlocks automatically. No waiting for me to wake up and check my email—you can keep reading at your own pace.
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The Questions
Each chapter has a short set of standard questions about characters, plot, and world-building (you can see the actual questions below). You can also add inline comments where you can highlight something specific.
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Your responses can be as brief or detailed as you like—some readers write a sentence, others write paragraphs! The most helpful thing you can do is explain why something does or doesn't work for you. That gives me something actionable to work with.
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Timeline
I typically request 1-2 days per chapter, but I get it—life happens! Just drop me a note if you need more time so I don't worry that I've lost you.
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What You Get
My eternal gratitude, a mention in the book's Acknowledgements, and a free copy of the ebook once it's published.
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Want to Get More Involved?
I have a Facebook group where I connect with my beta reading team between books. It's where I give updates on the current manuscript, discuss plot points for works in progress, share favorite quotes, and ask for input on story decisions. It's not required, but if you love being part of the creative process and want more behind-the-scenes involvement, it's the perfect place to dive deeper!
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Manuscripts coming soon for beta reading
Title: Legends of Shon-Dar: Trinket
Series: Legends of Shon-Dar
Length: 95k
Heat Level: None
Paranormal Elements: Shapeshifters, Vampires, Magical Beings & Critters
Setting: Medieval Fantasy world
Manuscript Status: In progress; should be ready for beta reading by the end of October
Basic Premise:
Trinket is a cheerfully optimistic slave girl with purple-tipped black hair and an irrepressible spirit that nothing can dim. Life serving in Master Jayce's tavern in Tampica is good—until a corrupt city guard named Crash kidnaps her, turning her world upside down.
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After escaping captivity, Trinket finds herself with the fierce Huntresses, who never keep female slaves—until they meet her. Two years later, everything changes again when she encounters Vasilis, a mysterious warrior-turned-assassin who rides a fearsome black war dragon. Something about him awakens the devoted slave's heart she thought she'd lost.
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Life with Vasilis brings adventures Trinket never imagined: serving in taverns as his eyes and ears, befriending temperamental war dragons, infiltrating diplomatic missions, and gathering intelligence. Her bouncy demeanor and distinctive appearance make her the perfect spy—who would suspect the purple-haired girl who can't stop chattering?
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But when Crash reappears, determined to reclaim what he believes is his, Trinket must rely on her master's protection and her own resourcefulness to escape the danger threatening her newfound happiness.
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From the high mountain dragonkeep to the bustling ports of Valemark and Silverport, follow Trinket's journey as she discovers that sometimes the most powerful weapon is an irrepressible spirit and unwavering loyalty—and that family can be found in the most unexpected places.
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Click here to sign up to beta read Legends of Shon-Dar: Trinket on Story Origin!
The Questions
These are the standard questions I have for each chapter in this manuscript:
1. What are your initial thoughts and impressions after reading this chapter?
2. Hero & Heroine: What are your thoughts on Trinket and/or Vasilis as/if they appear in this chapter?
3. Other characters in the chapter (if any): How do they come across to you? Is there enough (or too much) introduction to recurring characters?
4. Scenes in the chapter: Does each scene work? Do you understand what is happening?
5. World Building: Does it work for you? Why or why not? Do you get a sense of time and place?
6. Were any parts confusing or inconsistent?
7. Do you have any predictions, i.e., guesses as to what will happen next or in the future? (This question is optional... I leave it in because you all seem to like it so much, and it tickles me to see your predictions)
New to Beta Reading?
If you're new to beta reading, here's what you need to know:
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What Beta Readers Do
You'll provide feedback on characters, plot, world-building, and story development. When something works for you (or doesn't), you'll share your reactions and explain why. Your reader perspective is invaluable in shaping the story!
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What Beta Readers DON'T Do
Beta readers are NOT editors or proofreaders! You're not responsible for fixing grammar, punctuation, or spelling. You'll receive a clean manuscript—as polished as possible before it goes to a professional editor. Your job is to focus on the story and characters, not the technical details. Every writer handles this differently, but the golden rule is: you're giving feedback on content, not correcting copy.
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Want to Learn More?
Jenna Moreci is my go-to resource for the beta reading process! She has fantastic YouTube videos that are both informative and entertaining. I've based my own process on her advice, and I think you'll love her approach.
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Then these two older videos, which are also well worth watching:
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I also highly recommend this blog post: What is Not Required of a Beta Reader. It's a great reminder that as a volunteer, you shouldn't let anyone take advantage of you or expect more than reader feedback.
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